Year 8 film review comments needed....

Hi all! The year 8s have been working hard to create their film reviews and would really value some comments. The glogs are all numbered, so please leave a comment, saying which number glog you are commenting on.

Make sure that you use 2* and a wish!

Example

Number 653
* You used your classwork well, and I can see the sentence building work that we did in class being helpful
* Your presentation is really good, and it is clear you put lots of effort in
-> You need to look at verb endings in more detail - you have forgotten to make them fit the person you are talking about. You can find help on this in the BOB or in Metro!